And so the comments were:
- Horns at the interlude towards the last chorus sounds too muffled, it is an important part so it needs to come out more!
- Don't write too thick harmonies if I intend to record a real choir at the last chorus, probably can have sop and alto sing unison just to thicken up the sound.
- Maybe have all the instruments come in once again at the ending after Amelia's last sentence, to end the song "properly"? hahah
- Michael Spicer: "Sounds like a Singapore song!" DDDDD: NOOOOOO.